Wrong sentences wrong sentences of six types: word order wrong, with wrong, incomplete or spurious components, structural disorder, ideographic unknown, illogical
one word order wrong
1, multi-attribute multi-attribute sequential order of improper
general To:
possessive form of words, time, location + alleged pronouns, quantifier + verb + adjective + noun + center
other words, with attribute before.
listen:
⑴ an outstanding 20 years of experience as national team coach girls basketball.
normal word order should be: a team of 20 outstanding years of teaching experience Female basketball coach.
⑵ Lenin, which displays a variety of things used in the past.
normal word order should be: which displays used in the past Lenin, all sorts of things.
⑶ He is responsible for several of our group's cadres all together.
normal word order should be: He is responsible for several of our group with cadres called.
2, multiple adverbial adverbial order in the order of multiple improper
generally:
purpose or reason adverbial + Time, Place and + range + adverb + modal form or procedure + phrase + prepositional object headword
listen:
⑴ Yesterday, many representatives of enthusiasm in the rest room to talk with him.
normal word order should be: Yesterday, many delegates were enthusiastic in the lobby to talk with him.
⑵ on the festival's origin, widespread since ancient times in folk of Flight to the Moon > listen:
⑴ head wind blowing so I can not help shivering.
normal word order should be: the face of the wind blowing so I can not help shivering.
⑵ his mother that times all the way went to Beijing as a representative of the school came.
normal word order should be: his mother this time as a school representative went to Beijing came all the way.
4, logical order improper < br> listen:
⑴ medicinal value of many marine organisms are being promoted and found immeasurable future.
normal word order should be: the medicinal value of many marine species are being discovered and promotion, the future incalculable.
⑵ comprehensive reading of a brilliant scholar, revolutionary martyrs Dayong, passion of the poet.
normal word order should be: comprehensive reading of a brilliant scholar, passionate outpourings of poets, Dayong the revolutionary martyr.
5, clause order improper ⊙
listen:
⑴ the many masterpieces are not only a treasure of human artistic treasures, and the art treasures of the Chinese nation.
normal word order should be: so many masterpieces Not only is the Chinese art treasures, but also a treasure house of human art treasures.
6, function words misplaced
listen:
⑴ up if the check does not take advantage of contract farmers now work in front of places not to dig good.
normal word order should be: If you do not check to cultivate it now while the work up, eyes to bad to hoe.
⑵ if he can not be realistic, business will be affected.
normal word order should be : If he can not seek truth from facts, the cause will be affected.
⑶ the word order should be: :
① subject of two clauses in line after the first subject;
② the subject of two clauses are inconsistent, before the first subject.
example: ⑴ I not only know A, also recognized the B.
⑵ not know me A, B know me.
two mismatches
1, subject-predicate mismatches
listen:
⑴ into the dark clouds and heavy rain pouring down from the air. < br> ⑵ cotton production in China, the past can not be self-sufficient.
⑶ spring breeze blowing waves, swaying branches, moonlight, shaking up the number of video together, issued a rustling sound.
2, VO mismatches < br> listen:
⑴ Before the liberation, my father and brother paying the money they earned enough to feed a family life.
⑵ different from traditional calligraphy, modern calligraphy art in pursuit of visual arts, more attention to express their feelings in order to shape and personality.
3, the guest of honor with improper
listen:
⑴ off alone, cards, pressure, and not to do ideological work, do not give them solve practical problems, the is an extremely responsible attitude.
4, modifiers and Head mismatches (adverbial, complement and Head)
listen:
⑴ this conference, participants pay a wide range of views on issues.
⑵ the position of Secretary Ma Wenhua stand very firmly.
⑶ students clean the classroom clean, neat.
5, side and both sides go together < br> listen:
⑴ improved academic performance, depending on whether the student's own efforts.
⑵ artists has always been looked down upon, but today has been eagerly favor, in this dirty looks and favor, who will appreciate the human warmth.
⑶ production of relief work to do, decided whether the work style of cadres in depth.
6, negative and positive mismatches (negative result in multiple semantic errors)
listen:
⑴ I think this should not have described, no one would not imagine the.
⑵ close ties with the masses, in-depth investigations and studies, to avoid not commit the error of subjectivism.
three components incomplete and redundancy
1, lack of subject
A, the subject defects caused by misuse of prepositions
listen:
⑴ such good results because of her, got praise from teachers and students from a large number of observations
⑵ facts tell us that we must grasp continuous changes in the weather, the best observed every hour.
⑶ by one hundred patriotic theme of the film and broadcasting the concert, the audience again and again withstood the baptism of the spirit of patriotism, evoke the history contemplation, in honor of the hero.
B, secretly replace the subject defects caused by the subject
listen:
⑴ integrity he is a good cadre, get the people's support, and to him for the county duties.
C, clause subject omission defects caused by improper
listen:
⑴ This communication is efforts, hiding place, the final stage of history.
2, lack of predicate
listen:
⑴ I do not doubt their commitment to communist ideals and promising.
⑵ professionals to meet the transformation of the old building and development of new industry standards requirements, our school rules and regulations to create a new series of work. ⑶ ideological and political class should be students of political common sense and good moral character together.
3, missing object
listen: < br> ⑴ we make every effort to embark on China's agricultural mechanization and collectivization.
⑵ order to solve water shortage problems, water recycling fee had to carry out a water use and use river water instead of tap water use.
⑶ the development of cottage industries, the development of the family bee-keeping, pig, my village to get rich quickly, the average annual output value of 200 yuan.
4, lack of modifiers
listen:
⑴ in the game, the Qiang and Li Li wins won the championship of men and women.
5, redundancy
A, literal or semantic repetition
listen:
⑴ Sister Jiang will never yield to the enemy, covered by the enemy beaten black and blue.
⑵ Although is midnight, but there are still many fans to the airport to welcome the triumphant return of the officers and men of Mount Tai.
⑶ about our classes about fifty pole has been a League member, three fifteen.
⑷ this very acute shortage of drugs, not a last resort, can not be utilized.
⑸ contains a number of silent words unspoken words ah.
B, superfluous content than necessary
listen:
⑴ this kinds of news is bound to fraud, against the party's cause, we must resolutely opposed.
⑵ liberated literary tradition with folklore maintains close ties between the flesh and blood.
⑶ finally coming to the class, we quickly run to the basketball court to play basketball.
four unstructured
1, Sentence Mixture
listen:
⑴ this method and sanitary, and convenient, loved by the masses.
⑵ both sides one by one row of the gondola in the waves in the microwave.
⑶ cold fever granules is the main component Folium, Ban Langen, grass car a mixture of the river.
2, almost exactly half-way easy to listen
:
⑴ such as Du far as Under the leadership of Comrade Mao Zedong, looks like much changed.
⑶ Thus, when the bandits attack the guerrillas, when surrounded by anti-guerrilla, wiped out countless bandit troops.
⑷ counter-revolutionary conspiracy that should be exposed , but also exposed it.
V. ideographic unknown
1, the type of ambiguous sentences ambiguous
A, polysemy ambiguous
⑴ This book is yellow.
⑵ Lao Li true black.
⑶ lying in bed not long after, he remembered.
B, polyphone ambiguous
⑴ this person good talk.
⑵ still owed 1000 yuan.
⑶ see materials in the office.
C, homophones ambiguous
⑴ products are all qualified.
⑵ medical study found that the onion is a carcinogen.
D, improperly omitted ambiguous
⑴ lend him a book.
⑵ mother's memory.
⑶ see him that year was 8 years old.
F, active and passive unclear ambiguous
⑴ this person with Zhang do not know.
⑵ surgery is his father.
⑶ finish his joke.
G, caused by improper word order ambiguity
⑴ Secretary asked several school leadership, new semester Work with new promises.
⑵ two students to the Jinjiang Park Teachers voluntary tree-planting.
⑶ schools to the three doctors.
H, pause ambiguity caused by different superiors informed
⑴ You report back to the 15th of this month.
⑵ you say, but he also said.
⑶ our team beat them won the championship.
I, refer to the different ambiguous
⑴ getting dark , the repair of a hurry.
⑵ mother Wang Ling and her classmates go.
J, structures and different ambiguous
⑴ I want to study the document.
⑵ I want to Pork wire.
⑶ dog killed a hunter.
⑷ protect the people's army.
six, illogical
A, contradicting
⑴ how many victims he survived the A.
⑵ In the interview, I saw working people have suffered in the past.
⑶ all basically responsible at all levels received training.
⑷ the temperature of the sun's surface, but more than six Baidu .
B, classification is determined to enhance farm inappropriate
⑴ grain, cotton and cash crops production. (tied with the concept of species)
⑵ all the Youth League in particular, students should strive to learn scientific and cultural knowledge. ( Cross-parallel use of the concept)
⑶ swim voucher sub-ordinary tickets, tour tickets, monthly passes, season tickets of several.
C, subject-object inversion
⑴ newspaper at that time and opportunity to contact me are many. < br> ⑵ last year's learning, emotional and very different than this year.
⑶ sister told me, > D, contrary to common sense
⑴ gym class, Amy suddenly collapsed of heat stroke and I hurried busy divvying up to his squad leader carried the shade.
⑵ New Year's Eve, starry skies, we are in a round of the moon's light, a walk on campus.
⑶ high level of fraud Chinese, and many people do not want to approach production of new products, but specifically counterfeit and shoddy products.
skilled sensitive point, fast exposing just press the wrong sentences
is often thought, starting from the wrong sentences of the six types, in theory, to find the cause of the sentence reveals the often fast enough, such as proficiency in a number of sensitive points are prone to cause disease in sentences, often and quickly the sentence disease. exercise, it is necessary skilled sensitive disease following sentences point.
one parallel between sensitive. coordinate phrase language disease generally have the following situation.
1. coordinate phrase is not the same as the ingredients fully with the relevant components
tied with the same phrase, it is vulnerable to trade-off situations, such as:
spring of this year, the city's 210 fire engines, more than 300 fire officers and men, give up vacations, and always adhere to in their respective duty positions. (1999 high-exam)
the subject of the sentence, give up the vacation, and always adhere to their duty posts in the does not take care of, such as:
documents some of the problems in the economic field, from theoretical and policy provisions detailed and profound description. (1994 high-exam)
the sentence there are two parallel phrase, that sequence change it.
3. coordinate phrase can not be tied
logically speaking, there are two concepts such as species relationships, are not parallel; if inadvertently violated the rules of language will result in disease, such as :
our newspapers, magazines, television and all publications and more responsibility to set an example, put an end to the phenomenon of irregular words, and enhance awareness of using the specification language. (2000 high exam)
this sentence The not with the .
parallel coordinate phrase inappropriate phrase in the order of several phrases, though parallel, but there are also a logical sequence before and after, see the following sentence:
well-made, high quality material of the Animal Powder contains the function of strengthening the body many nutrients. (1989 high-exam)
the sentence in the choice of materials, may lead to the objects involved are not clear, which makes a variety of sentence comprehension, resulting in ambiguity, such as:
his back to the general manager and vice president secretly deposited this money released two banks. (1998 High-questions)
literally, First, his back, phrase, we must fully examine whether it is the language one way or another disease.
two sides of the word sensitive.
a statement, if a all walks of life to go, the key is to accelerate the training and creating a group of professionals. (1993)
② machine quality is good or bad, is to ensure production safety is an important condition. (1995 Shanghai Research)
③ We can not cultivate a ; both sides of the word, in terms of from two; the last part of the ; of the problems. cases and cases ② ③ holds the same language problem.
three long sentences sensitive.
long sentences easy to commit the wrong sentence elements is missing, this is due to long sentences with long distance between objects Note to relax people while ignoring the missing components. In addition, long sentences should also pay attention to sentence arrangement of hybridity and attribute the problem properly.
Bashang plateau natural conditions are very raw, year round wind seriously affected agricultural production, so completely change the dam area of poverty and backwardness, we must afforestation, sand-fixing. (Anhui Spring 2003 Volume)
order to fully promote the use of rapeseed into cottonseed cake feeding pigs, accelerate the development of livestock industry, the county conducted three breeder technology training courses. (1997)
for international crude oil prices move up at the United States, India and other countries have increased or established oil reserves, China also must quickly establish national strategic oil reserve system. (2003 )
Wang a few of our factory managers together to earnestly said: > Fourth, determine the tone .
how to make everyone become wealthy? key issue is knowledge play a decisive role. Knowledge of the poor will inevitably lead to the wealth of poor, often based on the wealth of knowledge to enrich enough premise. (2001) < br> It is obvious that this was the wrong case from the lingering just decision, the fundamental reason is that style does not is play. (Spring 2001)
This year, the number of college entrance examination at our school is the largest in history year.
Zhang Changfu, 22, is a graduate.
five, negative sentences, rhetorical questions used in conjunction sensitive, this sentence, often the intended meaning backwards.
is enough to denied cultivate the talent is not our responsibility to build up?
Lei Feng spirit, of course to give it new meaning, but who do not need to learn from Lei Feng is denied of it?
six words associated with sensitivity.
related words are Generally, there are three diseases caused by sentence, one word associated with inappropriate position, which is a word you can remember, , the associated words in the subject before. The second is related words do not match. The third is to impose logic. especially the imposition of causal relationship between the conditions.
ring regardless of climatic conditions and geographic conditions are extremely unfavorable, climbers are still difficulties to overcome, victory climb to the summit. (1993)
If people four to five hours and watched TV program, you will feel very tired.
the previous period, teaching application, because we value the classroom teaching, at the expense of the counseling.
seven, positive tone and negative word-sensitive.
term implies a class of positive and negative connotations, such as that, when these words and made it clear that affirmative, negative word when used in the community to express the meaning that the anti.
not occur in order to prevent such accidents, we have strengthened the education of traffic safety and management. (1993)
sleep three bogey; a bogey before will not be angry, two bogey before going to bed can not eat three square meals, avoid lying at the three non-windy. (1994)
the cultural center has an education and help backward youth, to save and nurture young people tripped place, many times by higher-level recognition. (1993, five provinces and cities)
eight sensitive quantifiers.
a number of phrases in the sentences, check for ambiguity.
9. He is responsible for several of our cadres and all together groups and confidently said: ; both can be modified to school leadership .
From these facts, the strong evidence of a truth: where there is a way.
analysis: the first sentence of this sentence as an abuse of the preposition should be establish the confidence to overcome difficulties. (1997)
or origin, source or origin of the Chinese table often used the rights and interests are in large limits of protection. (1999)
preposition ; that became the
ten, of our young students are not unfamiliar.
analysis: should be ; for the last; language teachers and workers in other languages.
【】 or amendments that mobilization on this issue, I have been careful consideration.
【】 or amendments that Today, the Spring Festival holiday has become rewarding business, After a correct understanding of many business leaders, focusing on improving product quality, increase economic efficiency, increase the intensity of rectification
seven typical structure of the table constitutes
】 【hh components from the preparation; sub-hh part composition. such as:
19. cough expectorant film is my factory new products, its main ingredient is Polygalaceae, bellflower, Fritillaria, ammonium chloride and other preparation. 【】 or amendments that hh ammonium chloride is far six parts, it shows that Chinese people not limited to fear of rape, the national spirit of self-improvement.
【】 or amendments that National Games emblem and mascot designs most of the candidates are mainly young teachers and students.
【】 or amendments that . such as:
23. He usually always quiet, but as long as one academic conference about his beloved profession, it has become a particularly active and more talkative.
】 【revisions or said 24. of about 30% of the youth that youth, ; up to three millions of dollars confusion, ideographic unknown, illogical
one word order wrong
1, a good 20 years of experience as women basketball national team coach.
2, which displays a variety of Lenin things used in the past.
3, he is responsible for several of our cadres and all together groups.
4, many delegates enthusiastically yesterday in the lobby to talk with him.
5, on the Mid-Autumn Festival s Day, widespread since ancient times in folk of all the way went to Beijing as a representative of the school came.
8, many of the medicinal value of marine life are being promoted and found immeasurable future.
9, comprehensive reading of a brilliant scholar, Dayong revolutionary martyrs, passion of the poet.
10, this masterpiece is not only the many artistic treasures treasures of mankind, and the art treasures of the Chinese nation.
11, if not now take advantage of the work to cultivate it up check , the immediate way to hoe bad.
12, if he is not seeking truth from facts, the cause will be affected.
13, the the public is still not released the book.
two mismatches
14, into the dark clouds and heavy rain pouring down from the air.
15, China's cotton production, the past can not be self-sufficient.
16, the spring breeze blowing waves, swaying branches, moonlight, shaking up the number of video together, issued a rustling sound. (∮)
17, liberation, my father and brother paying the money they earned enough to feed family life.
18, different from traditional calligraphy, modern calligraphy is the pursuit of visual art, pay more attention to style to express their feelings and personality.
19, rely on customs, cards, pressure, do not do ideological work, do not give them solve practical problems of people, is a very irresponsible attitude.
20, this conference, participants exchanged salary range of views.
21 , the position of Secretary Ma Wenhua stand very firmly.
22, the students clean the classroom clean, neat.
23, the improvement of academic performance, depending on whether the student's own efforts.
24, art has always been looked down upon people, but now it has been eagerly favor, in this dirty looks and favor, who will appreciate the warmth.
25, to do relief work production, determined whether the in-depth work style of cadres.
26, I do not think this should be described, no one would not imagine the.
27, close ties with the masses, in-depth investigations and studies, to avoid not commit the error of subjectivism.
three components Incomplete and redundancy
28, as she so good results, the teachers and students praise.
29, from a large number of observational facts tell us that we must grasp the continuous changes in the weather, preferably every hour observations.
30, by one hundred patriotic theme of the video broadcasting of the concert, the audience again and again withstood the baptism of the spirit of patriotism, evokes a meditation on history, the memory of the hero. < br> 31, he was a good honest and dedicated cadres, by the people's support, and to him for the magistrate's office.
32, this communication is about air strikes and threatened to place, the final stage of history.
34, I do not doubt their commitment to communist ideals and promising.
35 to meet the transformation of the old professional, construction and development of new industry standards requirements, our school to build and a series of new regulations work.
36, the ideological and political class should be students of political common sense and good moral character together.
37, we have to do everything possible to embark on China's agricultural mechanization and collectivization. < br> 38, in order to solve water shortage problems, water recycling fee had to carry out a water use and use river water instead of tap water use.
39, the development of cottage industries, the development of the family bee-keeping, pig, my village to get rich quickly average annual output value of 200 yuan.
40, in the game, the Qiang and Li Li won the championship for men and women.
41, Sister Jiang will never yield to the enemy, covered by the enemy beaten black and blue.
42 , although it is after midnight, but there are still many Tarzan fans to the airport to welcome the triumphant return of the officers and men.
43, our class of about fifty or so highly, has been a League member, three fifteen.
44 This very scarce drugs, not a last resort, can not be utilized.
45, the number of words contains a silent subtext ah.
46, this news is bound to fraud, against the party cause, we must resolutely oppose.
47, liberated literary tradition with folklore maintains close ties between the flesh and blood.
48, finally coming to the class, we quickly went to the basketball court to play basketball game.
four unstructured
49, which means but also health, and convenient, loved by the masses.
50, on both sides one by one row of the gondola in the waves in the microwave.
51, a cold granules is the main component fever Folium, Ban Langen, Ho-a mixture of the grass.
52, such as Du far as .
53, since the Chinese people to accept the Marxist ideology, China's revolution under the leadership of Comrade Mao Zedong, looks like much changed.
54, therefore, when the bandits attack, when the guerrillas were anti-guerrilla surrounded by numerous bandit troops wiped out.
55, counter-revolutionary conspiracy that should be exposed, but also exposed it.
V. ideographic unknown
1, ambiguous
Ambiguity Type
A, polysemy ambiguous B, polyphone ambiguous
⑴ This book is yellow. ⑴ man good talk.
⑵ Lao Li true black. ⑵ still owed 1000 yuan.
⑶ lying in bed not long after, he remembered. ⑶ see materials in the office.
C, homophones ambiguous D, improperly omitted ambiguous
⑴ products are all qualified. ⑴ lend him a book.
⑵ medical study found that the onion is a carcinogen. ⑵ mother's memory.
⑶ see him that year was 8 years old.
F, active and passive unclear ambiguous G, caused by improper word order ambiguity < br> ⑴ even Mr. Chang did not know this man. ⑴ Secretary asked the leadership of several schools, the work of the new semester with new promises.
⑵ surgery is his father. ⑵ two students to the Jinjiang Normal park on a voluntary tree planting.
⑶ finish his joke. ⑶ schools to the three doctors.
H, pause ambiguity caused by different I, refer to the different ambiguous
⑴ superior to notify you of this month 15 to report for duty. ⑴ getting dark, the truck was in a hurry.
⑵ you say, but he also said ....
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